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do you think this pic works

Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 11:01 pm
by gio67
i took it at 7am , canary wharf from city of london airport with 11-18 lens ,something about it catches me, its straight out of the camera except resize

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Re: do you think this pic works

Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 11:21 pm
by bakubo
This is what I figured out a long time ago. If it pleases me then it is a successful photo. Sometimes what pleases me pleases many other people too, but not always. Trust your own judgment. That doesn't mean that your own judgment won't change over time though. I know this isn't what you were asking but, nevertheless, I hope you find it useful.

Re: do you think this pic works

Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 12:10 am
by gio67
wise words babuko and your bang on the money

Re: do you think this pic works

Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 6:16 pm
by Winston
It works for me. For me, it would work a little better with some off the bottom.

Re: do you think this pic works

Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 10:52 pm
by Bodak
I'm with Winston, a little off the bottom, otherwise a fine shot.

Re: do you think this pic works

Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 11:06 pm
by gio67
once more i bow to your superior judgements, thanks

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Re: do you think this pic works

Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 11:13 pm
by Bodak
For me that is better, but like has been mentioned, it is you that has to be pleased.

Re: do you think this pic works

Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 11:51 pm
by Winston
Nothing superior about my judgment. It's was just my opinion (which everyone is entitled to) :mrgreen:

Re: do you think this pic works

Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 8:59 am
by gio67
Bodak wrote:For me that is better, but like has been mentioned, it is you that has to be pleased.
i understand that bodak and for me the first is better, somehow my eyes seem to fall right into the picture,the pic is doing something to my eyes that i can,t control, dragging them right into the centre buildings , for some unknown (to me) reason, it doesnt seem to happen with the second thanks everybody for the comments

Re: do you think this pic works

Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 9:59 am
by aster
Nice photo gio67, :D

I also support your judgement that the first version is better; I think that the uppermost shade of blue in the sky and lowermost of the waters make a strong match which create the illusion of being mirrored does the trick here, whereas in other circumstances the cropping would actually be a desired procedure.

The concept and the ' horizontally linear' subject make it unique making it a natural centerfold image....

Just my tiny bit of thoughts! :)

Yildiz

Re: do you think this pic works

Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 4:27 pm
by Winston
gio67 wrote:
Bodak wrote:...somehow my eyes seem to fall right into the picture,the pic is doing something to my eyes that i can,t control, dragging them right into the centre buildings , for some unknown (to me) reason, it doesnt seem to happen with the second...
Interesting...now that you have mentioned it, it happens to me too. Toss the crop.

Re: do you think this pic works

Posted: Tue May 19, 2009 10:13 pm
by kingfisher
a great picture

gustav

Re: do you think this pic works

Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:37 am
by bonneville
Despite the 2/3 convention I hear constantly from the visiting judges at my camera club competition nights, I prefer the original and I agree with the comments about the eye being drawn into it.

I thinks its a great shot. Image

But if I was in a conforming mood, by scrolling my screen view I am able to lob the top off which works better for me than losing that nice dark blue.

Thanks for posting it.

Brian