

Thanks
Ayan


My bad .. both are same photo, just vignetted slightly in 1st pic. Should I vignet more?bakubo wrote:Looks like the same photo to me. Looks good.
The girl, of course.adakshi wrote:Which one do you like most
Nope Mike, not at all negative. I know it has room for improvement. It was not staged, I didn't have much time to position myself. The picture doesn't tell the story properly, but what catches is the joy in the girl's face. Of course that smile made her hubby(my friend) happyMike wrote:I think the people standing in the background are very distracting and the background in general is too distracting. My eyes are confused, should I look at the camera or the people? IMHO a crop of just their faces would be a better picture. And it would be better if they were looking at each other or something farther in the distance vice the camera. With the distance of the camera it's not clear they are looking at the same thing if the camera is cropped out. Sorry if this sounds to negative.
Mike
I think you're right. So everything in the picture except the girl's face is a distraction. Rather than seeing the camera, I would rather wonder what she was smiling about. Just a suggestion ...adakshi wrote:Mike wrote:... but what catches is the joy in the girl's face.
KevinBarrett wrote:I thought I'd chime in and let you know I prefer the original.Vignetting, camera at arm's length, people in the background, and all. Most of all you've got to keep the camera in the final image, it gives context to their expressions and eliminates a lot of cropping awkwardness.
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