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I like the composition of the first shot a lot. The guy looks very self conscience in the second shot. But David makes a good point about the color. Can we see the first shot in color? The crop looks a bit troubled since her fingers are chopped off. I try to follow the tip from Scott Kelby's "The Digital Photography Book" of "Don't cut off joints."
Mike
P.S. I like this shot much better than the shot with the camera ... but what do I know