Still life (Industar 61 50/2,8 L/Z MC)

[Armen Gharib]

These shots have also been taken by Industar 61 50/2,8 L/Z MC attached on A700
Please advise me which of these 3 images looks more artistic.

[Javelin]

I Like the second one the best. I think the radishes being trimmed takes away from the picture because they are white inside and there no details like the oranges have. The corners are a little distracting though

[Armen Gharib]

Thank you Javelin!
Partly I accept your version, but don't you think that the white area of trimmed radish gives some contrast with orange and red and make the picture to be more colorful??

[Javelin]

I would agree except the background is white. maybe I don't know what i'm talking about so don't put too much stock in my critique but seems they may as well be holes you can see the background through where the whole uncut part makes it more interesting?

[Armen Gharib]

Javelin do you wish to see this version or I didn't understand right?

[Dr. Harout]

The last picture, added separately is much better, but frankly can't see the link of radish and orange...

[David Kilpatrick]

No, I think radish and orange is too radical - that's the root of the problem. I think some other combination of market produce might bear fruit.

David

[Armen Gharib]

Thank you for your comments,
I think that strawberry would be better but I had only radish and orange at my disposal, I only tried to do my best with these elements

[UrsaMajor]

No, I think radish and orange is too radical - that's the root of the problem. I think some other combination of market produce might bear fruit.

David,

For your sake, I hope that remark was unplanned.

Puns are my favorite form of humor, and when I see such fertile ground, I really have to struggle to restrain myself and avoid making things even worse.

With best wishes,
- Tom -